That profile picture needs more pone.
The voice quality is still quite bad. You may want to try to find a way to get them sound better, since the problems stick out. Otherwise this is very well made, so I hope you fix the voice issues. The girl's voice quality was better.
(V) That's not a very good sign.. The movie was pretty bad, unless you're referring to the book.. assuming The Lightning Thief was a book originally.
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