This turned out pretty well if you ask me! I can't wait to finish up part 2 with 'ya and publish THAT, too! 
Creative and fun. I really liked the colors spread all over the place. The platforming was great as well. My only concern would be the style--it's a teeny bit overused, but it looks awesome nonetheless! It deserved the spotlight to me, I'm guessing those who thought otherwise are simply jealous.