Since the contest concluded I have updated the title and description, however the actual level has not been changed since the judging.
This level is now finished! (contest deadline has passed) Thanks to everyone who gave feedback, it was really helpful and I've produced a level that I'm happy with and reflects my best effort.
Most of the technical issues have been addressed. Some of the challenges can be frustrating like the plasma pit near the beginning, I would slow down the rate that the plasma moves across the platforms just a touch but that's just me. Also the hill with the ninja stars can get frustrating but I suppose that's just part of the challenge. Also you might add a little light in the underwater grotto beneath the waterfall, it's kind of hard to see which way you should go. You've already fixed the key problems.
I have just over 15 hours left to republish, any last suggestions?
Sorry about that fallen checkpoint, fixed it earlier. Description updated as well.
Looping subtitles at the end have been fixed.
Some are stickers from the game, but yes, most are Move Paint.
The art style is amazing, did you make these all with Move Paint?