Lol!!! That old man in the picture in the background when Lemon was captured made me laugh so hard!!!! XD, probably one of the best films you can find on LBP2... very well deserved heart!!! Also, he claimed he had burned his hands in the oven... I saw no heat marks. Wherever you also got the name Nurse 'SackBottom' from must have been a funny place. I also noticed that Mr. Beggings change personality o quickly, that he'd thought of poor Mr.Lemon on pancakes probably XD. Brilliant story!!!
An entertaining short. The story was good enough, but the dialogue could be better in some places. But the music created an atmosphere that was right for the story. So on the whole, well done! P.S Improve punctuation and grammar.