LOOL after seeing this lets hope that lbp2 wont be full of companies advertising their products. good idea though
Very good commercial though you do have some spelling mistakes, in both instances you need to change " were " to " where ". were means past tense e.g My Dad and I were going to the shops tonight, but we couldn't because it was raining. Whereas " Where" means a place e.g A world where we can be happy or " where are we?"
WOW, amazing commercial! This could actually WIN and it could change people's mind about the WORLD! Hope... I hope you WIN! <3